Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Garden.

I might write more.

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Dew's own scent lives,
The veins run dual,
Occupied leaves and throbs,
Of life, green joy found,
Of children, blessed saplings.

Creepers lean, for life,
Even if supported, adding,
Curving eyes through bark,
If for sakes, deep difference,
Both join, sturdy veiled weak.

Grows the greens and others,
Living, or colored, within,
Without, sires remain old,
Flutters spread offspring,
Twice valued, nature dictates.

~ Ielfphil Raven.

7 comments:

Alexis. said...

wow! love the way you described the nature..

Ielfphil Raven said...

:) I wrote this listening to Physics in school. :P

Durenerin said...

I can't even begin to describe how much this poem jumps of the page.
I bet you could though.
Because you can make anything cool
Anything:)

<3
Aj.
We Should Talk More.

Zephyr said...

WOW!
I totally loved this last line
"Twice valued, nature dictates."

Beautiful. the way you described it.

And you SHOULD write more.

=)

Ielfphil Raven said...

Oh... Thanks you guys.
@ Aj : Ya think? :P
@ Bhav : I'm too lazy... :D

Gauri Mathur said...

Hey Thas Beautiful!
:)

Ielfphil Raven said...

Awww, Thanks Gauri! XD